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I present: the alternative
My sources have not given me very many pictures of vermin women, unfortunately
If I'm doing Krysa lore wrong anywhere let me know

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i will be making a CS soon ^^
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@AzureKnight
Alright, with the edits made, I think she'll be a fine addition once I get to acceptances here later this evening.

@Sniblet
Hmmhm, seems fine - but just so you're aware if it wasn't entirely clear since it might not have been explained too clearly, the Krysa are heavily Russian.

@Waylon
Ngl, I am slightly impressed with the CS. I was hoping someone would app the 'Didn't read fine print, now hunting demons' archetype in a way. She'll be trained in the use of rifles, pistols, and sword at a base level though she's by all means free to use what she's comfortable with.

Just be warned, the combat instructor will not go easy on her.

Otherwise, nothing else here needs to be changed I think. I'll look over everything else again this afternoon when doing final acceptances.
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Hey! You have room for more or a bit to full? I love the concept
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@SouffleGirl123

There's still room, yes. I don't really accept on a first come first serve basis and I haven't fully accepted anyone yet
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Glad you liked it! Looking forward to all of us here doing some fun and funny shit running with that concept. Here's hoping the maid organization you have in mind has a library stocked with all manner of books including extremely rare tomes pertaining to the culinary arts as well as kitchen-themed gear and weapons in the armory for anyone interested - needless to say, including Eleanor.
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@Sniblet
"A Krysa, hm? Doesn't seem like anything special...well, more expendable presences are always welcome. Assign her to help Bernadette in her workshop."

@Waylon
"...you realize reading is a requirement for this position, yes? Well, no matter, if you are willing, then we will teach you. You've already signed the contract anyways, so for five years you'll be learning to cook, clean...and well, maybe get a little taste of that silly heroic things you admire."

@Pyromania99
"My, what a silly looking cat. What do I define as an idiot? Perhaps I should send you a mirror as a gift? Well, no matter. Work hard and I'm sure even someone as crass and unpleasant as you could be turned into a good maid. Or at least you'll be a fun chewtoy for a demon or two."

@VitaVitaAR
"...I see. You are here because of her, hm? Well, I won't slander or waste time with needless fluff. Welcome aboard, Miss. I'm sure you'll do well here, hm?"
@Click This
"Ah, how is Lady Giselle doing these days? I should really come and visit soon. Well, no matter. I'm happy to accept her gift...though I do urge you to be careful. I would...dislike for an accident to happen in the field. This training can be rather difficult, after all."

@AzureKnight
"Roksandic...Roksandic...why is that name familiar...he might have been one of the old fools that colluded with my mother once. Well, no matter. She screwed over the both of us, hm? Well, worry not. Put in hard work you'll do just fine. I can assure you, that I at least, will not go the way Roksandic went."

Alright, so here we are. I think I shall be accepting every who has currently submitted a CS! So feel free to add them all to the Character tab. I will also be aiming at least, to get an IC started in some form tonight simply because I work all weekend and do not wanna wait another week to get the IC started.



@SouffleGirl123
Don't worry, I may still be accepting one more, so feel free to go ahead and make a CS, but you'll be the last.

@Waylon
And worry not. The Maison d'Violette has an extensive library full of well...many things. She might even find a book on demonic cuisine or too. How'd that get there? Don't question it.

Also, here's a Discord link! Joining is not required, but I heavily recommend it at least, as that's where I'll be hanging most of the time. The link expires after 24 hours, so please join at the earliest convenience~
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And the IC has started!

Lemme know if anyone here has any questions or if I can clarify anything, but for now, you're starting on the Violet Garden's airship and are being directed to the top deck for mission briefing.
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My schedule is actually pretty busy and there seems to be plenty of characters, so I'll rescind my interest. Good luck to all of you!
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My schedule is actually pretty busy and there seems to be plenty of characters, so I'll rescind my interest. Good luck to all of you!


I see, well that's a shame

I'll keep a spot reserved for you in the future just in case.
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Two questions:

Do the trainees all share the same sleeping quarters like in a dormitory or a barracks, or do they each get small rooms of their own like monastic cells?

Also, do they all wear the exact same maid uniform, or are variations allowed?
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@Waylon

Its more of a dormitory back at the Maison, but the Airship is more well, what you'd see in a military ship so it'd be more of a barracks.

And some variation is allowed in uniform, as long as its clearly identifiable as a maid dress.
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My CS for your perusal @Rune_Alchemist

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Since there's an airship, I take it there'll be things like steam tanks too?
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@SouffleGirl123
At work rn so ill do a full read when i get home tonight

@Waylon
Check leoniya's little profile in the character tab for your answer~
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Okay, I don't have a lot of time to really respond here as I need to head to bed soon, but...

The sheet, is mechanically and grammatically fine. In fact a family of demon hunting elves could work great. I think its a good sheet...but as it stands, I'm not sure it makes a good elf in the setting.

There is not an Elf in the world that doesn't have a bonded fairy of some sort, since an Elfs entire reason for existing is to protect their fey friends. It's considered a huge social and cultural taboo for an Elf not to have one. Think of a bonded fairy as sort of, a lifelong best friend or something similar. They'd overall be shunned and frowned upon by most other elves and they'd probably be constantly harassed by Fairies too.

I believe you mentioned that her family ended up here in the human realm from a magical mishap? I would like to mention, if it wasn't stated earlier that Fey are pretty inherently magical beings that sort of overwrite the laws of whatever realm they're in with their own. It'd be extremely easy for her ancestors to return to the Cosain forest or the realm.

Its fine if she doesn't, and fine if you do want her family to stay in the human realm for 'generations' as its ascribed to the long lived elves, but even if her family does, her family would still likely at least take some effort to get her a bonded fairy. You don't have to create an entirely new character here if you don't want too, but I'd like at least some mention of one and whether or not they're joining her on her demon hunting or not.

And also, as previously stated all Elves are capable of accessing the 'Leargas', a sort of...hm, ability that allows them to briefly harness all the knowledge and experience of their ancestors. Its dangerous, but all elves of the Cosain forest are capable of it. I'd like to really know her skill in accessing it or using it, if any.

Those are the main criticisms I have at the moment. Lesser so, is the crossbow...I'm gonna say I think its a bit too low tech here, but I think it could work if you don't mind it being a bit on the weaker side technologically speaking.
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@Rune_Alchemistwould it just make ot easier if I made her human perhaps? Otherwose I can work on making a bonded fae but it'd solve a lot of the criticisms.

I genuinely don't mind her being more underpowered- that was kind of the intention but I can change it if it really doesn't work?
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@SouffleGirl123
First of all, sorry for taking awhile to get back. I work sixteen hour shifts sunday so my time on the weekends is limited lol.

That aside, being under powered is totally fine, just wanted you to be aware so there was no misunderstandings later.

And I think making her a human would probably work better if I'm being honest.

Everyone else - since everyone has posted at least once, I shall be working on an update to get up at the end of the day.
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if you three could move your CS to the character tab, that'd be great thanks~

Anyways, have Myrilla being your stereotypical sadistic drill instructor. Feel free to ask for clarifying information to make your jobs easier...or not, and just go for it. I will be aiming to post again on Friday.
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