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LSJ Rose I killed all the mortals with Zamasu, AITA?

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can i join?
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@LSJ Rose Yuh


yay, ty :D
it might take me kinda long for the cs/posts though
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Then no. jk
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Then no. jk


oof lol
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can someone help me with this? ;-;
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can someone help me with this? ;-;


I like the idea! What is it you're needing help for?

Things I'd like to address briefly:

A. How does the cardinal act as a curse as it sits on her shoulder? Does it whisper insane, old god phrases into her ear? Does it chirp every time she attempts to stealth (definitely a negative as she's a rogue archetype)? Is it a really fat bird and it weighs her down? All that to say without further detriments, I would just move it up from curse and add it to the blessing. Personally I don't think it's powerful enough to warrant a curse unless you want to add more.

B. The blessing almost feels redundant. My initial read was that touching the cardinal would grant courage to someone already courageous. I think I understand it now that if courage is required for a situation and the cardinal is available and amenable, then it would definitely be a boon; e.g. jumping a chasm.
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<Snipped quote by LSJ Rose>

I like the idea! What is it you're needing help for?

Things I'd like to address briefly:

A. How does the cardinal act as a curse as it sits on her shoulder? Does it whisper insane, old god phrases into her ear? Does it chirp every time she attempts to stealth (definitely a negative as she's a rogue archetype)? Is it a really fat bird and it weighs her down? All that to say without further detriments, I would just move it up from curse and add it to the blessing. Personally I don't think it's powerful enough to warrant a curse unless you want to add more.

B. The blessing almost feels redundant. My initial read was that touching the cardinal would grant courage to someone already courageous. I think I understand it now that if courage is required for a situation and the cardinal is available and amenable, then it would definitely be a boon; e.g. jumping a chasm.


A. It's really just there to annoy everyone; I'll add the stealth idea to it
B. Should I change it, or have no blessing at all?
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@LSJ Rose Read his advice, the kobold had some good ideas.
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A. It's really just there to annoy everyone; I'll add the stealth idea to it
B. Should I change it, or have no blessing at all?


Ultimately it's your character and your choice. I think the blessing is fine. After considering it all, I'd just move the "curse" aspect of the cardinal up into the blessing. Threatening to take you out of stealthy stuff with the bird feels like a bigger detriment than having the boon of courage, so if you're fine with it I say go for it.

Overall, a cool character that seems to go against the normal archetype (impatient rogue) in a good way.
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@LSJ Rose Here is an idea:

Your trying to do the whole "Reborn from the ash's thing" like a Phoenix right? Maybe your vulnerable to cold elements and immune to fire?
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@Dark Cloud That's actually not a bad idea, on the Phoenix thing. There are two items in the game (maybe more, it's been a while since I played) that resurrect your character when you die (or bump you back up to x% hp on killing blow, but same difference). Those are pretty strong, and I think to start off with that for the RP would be really strong. So to counter that in a sense, the cardinal could just be a baby Phoenix that requires some boxes to be checked for it to fully form into a grown Phoenix, allowing a one-time rebirth.

Could be something simple like: kill x enemies with the cardinal (very difficult as it is a regular bird), feed cardinal x potion x times, or feed it x fruit.

Or rather than rebirth, it can passively give a boost in a small aura like fire resistance or extra movement speed.

But that's all just if you go with a Phoenix. If you want to stick with a cardinal of courage, I think that's good too. Maybe it can have long-term effects. Maybe it can warn the next ? room will have enemies.
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@Dark Cloud That's actually not a bad idea, on the Phoenix thing. There are two items in the game (maybe more, it's been a while since I played) that resurrect your character when you die (or bump you back up to x% hp on killing blow, but same difference). Those are pretty strong, and I think to start off with that for the RP would be really strong. So to counter that in a sense, the cardinal could just be a baby Phoenix that requires some boxes to be checked for it to fully form into a grown Phoenix, allowing a one-time rebirth.

Could be something simple like: kill x enemies with the cardinal (very difficult as it is a regular bird), feed cardinal x potion x times, or feed it x fruit.

Or rather than rebirth, it can passively give a boost in a small aura like fire resistance or extra movement speed.

But that's all just if you go with a Phoenix. If you want to stick with a cardinal of courage, I think that's good too. Maybe it can have long-term effects. Maybe it can warn the next ? room will have enemies.


I'll do the room effect,
thanks @Lucky and @Dark Cloud :D
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@LSJ Rose Here is an idea:

Your trying to do the whole "Reborn from the ash's thing" like a Phoenix right? Maybe your vulnerable to cold elements and immune to fire?


I might do that, lol
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i finished it

if you want me to change or add anything, i'll do it
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@Whoami Man, somehow missed your post! Take all the rest you need, falls can get really nasty on ice.
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Well I'm happy to see this resolved upon coming home for the night. lol

Again, I'll get into detail on all of this on the weekend. I appreciate the patience! So far things are looking good!

EDIT: I'm gonna be quite quiet tonight and tomorrow. Slipped on ice as I was heading into work today and screwed my neck a bit. A headache and pinched nerve make me want to take it easy and avoid too much time in front of a screen.

EDIT EDIT: It's not a concussion


Good lord man take it easy and chill we'll ve here and be patient cause head injuries are no joke.
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Application with a cultist(?) warlock.


also
@Lucky mask gang mask gang mask gang
@Dark Cloud sup
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@DracoLunaris Yo nice to see ya.
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@DracoLunaris Ooh, I love her. Also
mask gang mask gang mask gang

Edit: We can be the masked bandit gang.
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